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so i need a bit of help here, how can i make this better? how am i meant to do it? because i'm sure i do it wrong.
The part with the purple line is where i need help

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yay got further, idk if i start the next page with this or add it to the one before, it just a really good beggining for the next page i feel like

here is a little wip, but I blank the names out this time, because I felt like it, maybe you can give me a little tip on how to keep going, pretty much "DarkBlue" is going to ask something again but i don't wanna write ""DarkBlue" ask,, right away

so i need a bit of help, i made a mistake in my story, i need Yes&No questions, meaning with that question there i can't keep going, maybe there is a way to turn it into a Yes&No questions, or just a diffren't Yes&No question, anything so i can keep going

Goodbye for a very long time.

Thank you all for 100 followers! Keep your eye out for good stuff in the future! Also, feel free to ask me anything in the comments!

In case y'all were worried, none of my stories are dead (except for Sonic Shatterverse but we don't talk about that). I'm just busy with unreleased stories, such as...

Hey guys, should I start applying for #writing positions on #gamedevelopment teams? This would be a huge step forward and I figured I should get a few extra opinions before starting.